Songwriting tips...

[HeatMan]

@prvi post:

what about:

marlena shaw: woman of gheto?




treba puci na emociju/ritam odmah.

BUM - "HA, sto soma zvanica, red se razvlachi od mamuta do kalisha"

jako.

i ne zajebavam se sad..

[Eeva_r&b]

Nisi sacekao ni da zavrsim thread uh..

what about
intro od 40 sek za until then hahah
btw citaj ovo sve...nije za bacanje

Originally Posted by HeatMan

@prvi post:

what about:

marlena shaw: woman of gheto?




treba puci na emociju/ritam odmah.

BUM - "HA, sto soma zvanica, red se razvlachi od mamuta do kalisha"

jako.

i ne zajebavam se sad..

[Eeva_r&b]

LOGICAL GAPS CAN KILL YOUR SONG

Unlike poems, (which can be read and re-read until you understand them), songs come at you--line by line. And if listeners come upon any big logical gaps in a song or confusing bits, they will often stop listening and start solving the mystery.
Meanwhile, the song just keeps coming out of the speakers like a line of freight cars. Once they pile up...the listener gets frustrated and gives up. Then he's fiddling for another button on the radio.
In my experience, these gaps often happen because YOU as writer know the story in your head already. But listeners only know what you tell them in the song's lines. Inexperienced writers will often leave things out without realizing it. Sometimes the gap is right at the beginning...the song starts and the listeners are immediately lost. If you don't let them have their bearings, they'll just turn you off.


I've had new writers argue that they don't want to give too much away...they want to hold some important details back for mystery's sake. As we learned in the last tip, music listeners do LOVE surprises. But they don't love being lost.

[HeatMan]

Originally Posted by Eeva_r&b

Nisi sacekao ni da zavrsim thread uh..

what about
intro od 40 sek za until then hahah
btw citaj ovo sve...nije za bacanje

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jbt.. mislio sam da radimo dobru ziku, a ne glupu komercijalu.. mislim ovo "ne pametujte".. zashto? ako je dobro, onda zashto ne?

ma ajte molimte..

nisam znao da cesh nastaviti da pishesh jbg..

[Eeva_r&b]

Originally Posted by HeatMan

jbt.. mislio sam da radimo dobru ziku, a ne glupu komercijalu.. mislim ovo "ne pametujte".. zashto? ako je dobro, onda zashto ne?

ma ajte molimte..

nisam znao da cesh nastaviti da pishesh jbg..

Nigde ne pise da je u pitanju bilo kakva komercijala,niti da se 'ne pametuje' (ne znam sta pod tim podrazumevas uopste??),vec da treba imati mere u svemu i obzira na to koliko su slusaoci nestrpljivi...
drugo,ne razumem zasto mi uporno ne verujes...jesam li uradila do sad nesto sto je 'glupa komercijala' ?(reklama za pink up se ne racuna,to je REKLAMA Bogom dana da bude komercijalna,i morao je onakav text)
To sto zelim da nam muzika privlaci paznju ne znaci da je to nesto fuj odvratno i ponizno...i ko zna sta...

[HeatMan]

Originally Posted by Eeva_r&b

Nigde ne pise da je u pitanju bilo kakva komercijala,niti da se 'ne pametuje' (ne znam sta pod tim podrazumevas uopste??),vec da treba imati mere u svemu i obzira na to koliko su slusaoci nestrpljivi...
drugo,ne razumem zasto mi uporno ne verujes...jesam li uradila do sad nesto sto je 'glupa komercijala' ?(reklama za pink up se ne racuna,to je REKLAMA Bogom dana da bude komercijalna,i morao je onakav text)
To sto zelim da nam muzika privlaci paznju ne znaci da je to nesto fuj odvratno i ponizno...i ko zna sta...

hahhahah aj da ne trujemo temu.. jbt koja si paljevina.. opusti se.. :*

[Marko_Charvel]

Kao što je poštovani gos'n Eddie Van Halen rekao "If it sounds good it's good".

[clusterchord]

eh velike pameti..

sto je nekome dobro ili nije.. je apsolutno subjektivno..


bolje mu je nek nastavi sa soliranjem..